ext_193452 ([identity profile] siro-gravity.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mamculuna 2010-06-06 07:25 am (UTC)

Well, I don't know if you're looking for the "wrong" thing, but if he is writing the same kinds of endings to his books, then certainly he intends something by it.

If you find any books less focused on teaching online writing, I'd love to get a title from you!

And then on page 506 ("Nsara"), the Black Death visits the book itself. The book's dialog comes to a grinding halt. Social change skitters and stops. News of the world just sort of peters out into nothingness. The author stops telling a story through the characters and plot. Instead we're informed that stuff happened, and here's how the characters feel about it.

To use the book's description, we're treated to 158 pages of coffe-shop talk. I can't tell you what a disappointment the last two chapters were. A storyline certainly unfolds, but it drowns in pages and pages of social commentary. The author seems to have saved his entire life's worth of preaching on the futility of religion, horrors of war, and the evils of racism for this lengthy diatribe. Any editor worth a tinker's damn would have told him to make his point in the story (which he did fantastically throughout the book) and save the dense, unrelenting commentary for his memoirs or the Op-Ed page.


eesh. that sounds TERRIBLE. like he did not have the energy to finish well. how odd!!!!

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